MH Fanfiction [Ch. 37 is out]

remember that he got betrayed by Calvis shortly before he met The Creators so he doesnt trust anyone and doesnt care about anything.

i know i would have to explain how he became a member of The Creators soon anyways so i did it now.

Ch. 22 is out.

i had fun typing this chapter and u'll c when u read it.

thank you for working so hard Forte, it's been well worth waiting. Take your time and enjoy yourself.

thanks for the compliment Lyra, i am taking my time and enjoying myself as i type this story, granted that coming up with OC Hunter names r sometimes a pain and the city name was well.

i already know how the last 2-3 chapters are going to go and im sure that everyone will be surprised by what im going to do.

if only i had netflix to watch the eps ill just download it from a site and read tomorrow to review it lol xD

y do u call them eps? its not an anime

cus whenever i read it i see it as if i was watching a anime
i just picture those moments exacly lol

makes sense.

-anger glare- loool i picture those part everytime and laugh at it xD
Loved this chapter lol

and the flames of anger surrounding them too right?

Just read it and saw some things

A kind of "sudden" change in zedept´s personality, kind of too fast
Also Im seeing it is becoming like a harem style story, just to let you know

There are some grammar errors here and there, but its going calm

ZX Forte wrote:and the flames of anger surrounding them too right?

yeah that too xD

Ch. 23 is out.

i liked the chapter cant wait for ep 24 to see which one he pick o.o.

Just read it and passed it, kind of.. predictable with the confession and doubt parts, yet a relaxing chapter I guess

Just read 23 and 24...i knew when you went wt the remembering chapter you were gonna add her to the list, lol. Yes, i can see the flames of anger and the anger looks lol, but you know he did sort of just act like Lyra and Raylin suddenly didn't exist and got super chatty wt Kana...he hasn't been that way with anyone so far, so i see what Kristia says about too fast.
Boy you sure have plans to put him in even more hot water and break a few hearts, and i can't see Xblades staying together if you add Kana and choose her. He formed it with Lyra and Raylin and they are friends, knowing he is going to pick between them, but if you add Kana who is sort of throwing herself at him, lol i don't think either of them would be able to stay. They are already mad, and well i assume you do know how girls are.

and there's poor Link with still no girl Awwww

i havent typed 24 yet, fanfiction.net thinks that the special and prologue chapters are actual chapters.

when i was thinking about how i was going to do love interests, i was going to do it with his childhood friend, a friend who he met during his travels and an old teammate. so now thats done.

right now, i dont have any plans on having Zedept actually choosing a girl atm.

as for Link, he'll get one near the end so niart should stop worrying about it.

i see well looking for to it
-flames of anger on me and lyra- lol jk i still love that alot xD

fire scorching his hairline from behind...fuming auras surrounding them ready to ignite, lolol

no, they're already lit and Zedept is going to b in trouble for the next few chapters.

i would well imagine, lolol
he is sooooooo lucky, or maybe Kana is...that Lyra didn't wake up during her little attack and confession lolol
talk about being in the fire

lyra lest work together to get that kana lol jk xD

lol

Im so glad I don´t swing that way and be a kind of veteran hunter >_<

i figured that 3 would be enough, dont need Zedept dead b4 the Ala hunt