Re: MH Fanfiction [Ch. 37 is out]

by **Kristia** Wed Oct 10, 2012 12:54 am

being inside a jhen.. slashing your way out of it..
and when your blood stained face finally sees the sky..

You just say.. "An epic hunt"

by **ZX Forte** Wed Oct 10, 2012 12:55 am

lol, true.

by **ZX Forte** Wed Oct 10, 2012 3:27 am

Ch. 21 is out

by **Kristia** Wed Oct 10, 2012 6:19 pm

ohh the hearts are starting to bloom, interesting things will happen sooner
or later.

Battling a variant of a monster was good and again team tactics
are being nicely used, yet it felt kinda robotic with the flow of the
battle.

by **ZX Forte** Wed Oct 10, 2012 10:20 pm

well, the video i watched for the White Lagia battle, it used the triple lighting ball attack alot and it showed 2 new moves so i used those in the battle as well.

by **Kristia** Wed Oct 10, 2012 11:14 pm

indeed the ideas were smooth

by **Rayquaza200** Sun Oct 14, 2012 3:36 pm

i still have to read ep 21 i will in abit though i got spoilers by reading the post in here :0

by **ZX Forte** Sun Oct 14, 2012 3:41 pm

only on the monster

by **Rayquaza200** Tue Oct 16, 2012 12:30 pm

just readed the chapter liked it as always felted quick but still good Razz

keep up the work ^.^

by **ZX Forte** Tue Oct 16, 2012 12:32 pm

well, it had less than 1000 words so it was a short chapter but dont worry, i plan to have the next one to be longer since its a memory chapter.

by **Rayquaza200** Fri Oct 19, 2012 2:18 pm

i wonder what monster will be next Very Happy

by **ZX Forte** Fri Oct 19, 2012 2:22 pm

well, since its a memory chapter, it will take place b4 Zedept and Lyra reunited. i may not do just a monster, might do 2 or more but i havent figured out how it should go yet so until i figure that out, i wont be typing it atm.

by **Rayquaza200** Fri Oct 19, 2012 2:27 pm

i see well take your time ^^ looking foward to the new ep
(idk why whenever i read it i picture that exact moment in anime style in my head xD)

by **Kristia** Fri Oct 19, 2012 2:28 pm

well, the imagination (and all the anime and manga) give us everything to see the story

by **ZX Forte** Fri Oct 19, 2012 3:00 pm

i try to be as detailed as possible considering im not that good when it comes to details. when i do type the chapters i try to picture it as a manga so i can get the gist of what im trying to type.

by **Rayquaza200** Sat Oct 20, 2012 5:35 pm

even though u say ur not good

you do pretty good at making a nice story :3

by **Kristia** Sat Oct 20, 2012 5:57 pm

indeed

by **ZX Forte** Fri Oct 26, 2012 9:25 pm

im working on the new chapter now so it will b done b4 midnight, its a special chapter so i hope u enjoy it once im done with it.

by **ZX Forte** Sat Oct 27, 2012 1:09 am

The new chapter is out.

sorry ray, i wanted to get it in before ur bday was up so u wouldve gotten a new chapter for ur bday but i got it done at 11:59 and by the time i had it up, it was 12:03 so consider it a late bday gift.

Enjoy this back story.

by **Lyra** Sat Oct 27, 2012 9:03 pm

i liked your bit of backstory. poor Zedept, so young, angry, and hurt....must have been a long 5 years. It was nice to find out how he was one of the creator's members, but is he longing for other girls? when he already has 2 that like him? lol it must be that he's the dark, mysterious, and brooding types... Laughing

by **ZX Forte** Sat Oct 27, 2012 9:05 pm

lol, but u got to remember that this happened b4 he meet Lyra again.

EDIT: with the story 3/4ths done, i think theres going to b about 10-20 chapters left, it all depends on how much i put into each chapter and thats including more special chapters. when im done with the story im going to do a spoiler thing for everyone so be ready for that.

by **Lyra** Sat Oct 27, 2012 9:14 pm

yeah ik but not the thinking back lolol

by **Rayquaza200** Sun Oct 28, 2012 1:01 am

new chapter out o.o i guess ill read it tomorrow

by **ZX Forte** Sun Oct 28, 2012 1:03 am

been out since yesterday

by **Kristia** Mon Oct 29, 2012 7:35 pm

Just read it and done.

Good
- Explanation of him
- How he meets creators

Bad
- Too pissed off with everything and everyone

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