Monster Hunter fanfiction

I just made an MH fanfic. If you guys liked it, I'll continue making it. Heres the site

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8999548/1/Monster-Hunter

check review cause im not typing it twice and i forgot to put that u didnt mention what jared was wearing.

Sorry bout that.....my cousin wrote this chapter. I'll ask him what J is wearing so I can continue the rest

I'm back with 2 new chapters! Hope you like it

i liked Diana, she looks like a nice hunter and person, so far is ok

All of my characters are made by my friends. Here are some of the ones we made so far;

1. Quena (f) Sayuna Guild
Age, 16
Weapon, Princess Rapier (S&S)
Armor, modified Rathian set (smaller tasset)
Expert in, Healing allies

2. Dino (m) Sayuna Guild
Age, 18
Weapon, unspecified (under debate if he'll use the insect staff or a longsword)
Armor, Nibelsnarf set (Hapurubokka)
Expert in, comboing foes with fast and powerful attacks

3. Janus (m) Sayuna Guild
Age, 18
Weapon, Rathalos Firesword (GS)
Armor, Agnaktor set
Expert in, attacking with slow but powerful fire attacks

4. Raycee (f) Sayuna Guild
Age, 18
Weapon, 64th Division Bow III
Armor, Viking Set
Expert in, fast and accurate water arrows to distract monsters

Quena and Dino seem nice, i wonder if Janus is like the usual type of male hunter, and Raycee looks like a fast sniper

A new chapter is out. "Bird Wyvern Trap"

New chapter and an appearance of cha-cha, kayamba, and Moga village.