MH Fanfiction [Ch. 37 is out]

It's just the natural progression of the conversation.

Ch. 28 is out and hopefully this clears up everything about Zedept, if there r some things ur still unclear on, let me know

since no one has posted here i guess no one has read the new chapter yet *sigh* and after i went and explained about Zedept's "power"

Im sorry, im extremely busy at work this days >_<

My coworkers are still on vacation and im dealing with 16 kids for two shifts

u work at a daycare or something?

I work at a day-care since almost 2 years

the new chapter, 29 is out, hope u all like whats happens

I still think you saw a dental ad while making your villian lol

Its interesting thaat the so powerful hunter fell so easily in a trap

I expect there will be blood on next xhapter or chapters

Kristia wrote:I still think you saw a dental ad while making your villian lol

nope, havent been to one in awhile

Its interesting that the so powerful hunter fell so easily in a trap

remember that he wasnt focusing on his surroundings

I expect there will be blood on next chapter or chapters

we'll c

Ch. 30 is out, i cut the chapter in half so u'll have to wait for the next one to find out what happens

Hi, remember me? Sorry i've been gone for a while. Recently read ch. 30 and cant
Wait for whats gonna happen next

do to computer problems, Ultimate Hunt will b down until the computer gets fixed, i do apologize and once the problem is fixed, i'll notify here about it so please b patient.

that stinks this is like a anime now we need to wait for season 2 to find out :0

the long awaited Ch. 31 is now out so i hope u enjoy it.

Ch. 32 is out

Enjoy

Im pretty sure you are boiling a pot that will explode soon

so I hope it has a nice taste

Ch. 33 is out.

its strange that a pack of creatures suddenly leave and only 4 stay at guard

was ok, fast and quick written

Ch. 34 is out

i hope u guys enjoy this chapter and it focuses on one person so i hope its good.

Enjoy.

I liked how you gave some story to other characters, it was good and calm

Can't wait for the upcoming chapters. Keep it up! You have our support

Finally stayed awake long enough to read the last chapter, (everytime i remembered to look it up it was always really late, lol)
anyways, good chapter. i think it's remarkably funny that after Crazytrain complained about Zedept getting all the action, it's Link who finally gets the girl before Zedept...and he bypassed all the drama Zedept has been going through with the 3 girls, lol
good job, and nice surprise, altho Zedept is being an ass lolol
pick his girl already....somebody might die soon....

i second on what Lyra said, i feel that there will be a duel and there will be no winner

Btw, I wonder if there will be a chapter were one of the team has an emotional crisis, for example, for what I know, there hasn´t been said anything about the parents of the whole Xcros party.

I had this idea while reading a book were the character discovers that cause of the death of his/her parents is a certain enemy that is now in front of it, and there is the option of killing the enemy and becoming what the person hates or spare the enemy´s life to retain his/her humanity

due to some harsh and unessesary reviews, im only going to post the chapters here. the story soon to come.